magazine proposal pitch & feedback.

magazine proposal pitch


feedback:

The overall feedback i received from my peers was good. They liked my ideas and as i explained the elements of my magazine well there weren't many question other than one where the audience didn't really know what 'the dark side of hip hop' was so taking this into consideration, i will be highlighting and explaining this properly in my magazine so the audience are well aware of it. Personally i'd also like to develop my magazine more than i already have to make sure it reaches the standards of a professional magazine.